Hello, my name is Balthasar. Love is a beautiful thing; if
you get to experience love, you are very lucky. Love is hard, but at the end of
the day it’s worth it and that person you love means the world to you. Love
should be gentle it should have a caring feeling too it. I care for Romeo, and
that is why I told him that Juliet is gone; that is why I helped him run from
the police. You should be loyal to the one you love; you should support them
throughout what goes on in their life. Romeo was going to get caught by the
police, but I helped him because he is my best friend and I love him for who he
is. He has been with me through everything and loved me even though I am a
servant; he treated me like a brother and I paid him back. Everything shouldn’t
be about sex or having sex, it should be about your relationship. I would
rather be happy to spend time with the one I love by cuddling or watching a
movie, rather than having sex. Love is lasting; you really just have to respect
it. If you truly love someone and want to be with them, you will try your
hardest to stay with them. Love is special; if you get to experience it you are
truly very lucky because not everyone gets the chance to. Love is like a roller
coaster; there are ups and downs. You still enjoy the ride as you go; it makes
you stronger. Once you ride a rollercoaster, you are not afraid of riding
another one because you already know what it’s like. I like to be gentle; love
is not made to be rough. Love is made to cherish memories and enjoy things together;
love is finding your happiness in someone else’s. Love should have emotion to it; I cried when
I told Romeo, Juliet is gone. There is an emotion to it because I can feel the
pain that he will go through. You become a part of the one you love, and when
they get hurt, you feel it. Love has so much to it, it is truly very important
and you should cherish the one you love or are in love with because not
everyone is able to get that. Overall, remember that love is a beautiful thing,
cherish it while you have it and remember to be gentle; hold their hand through
the rollercoaster and don’t let go because you never know how the ride will
end.
Great blog post Simmy !! I love how you explained love in such great detail.
ReplyDeleteNice blog Simran. I like how you explained love really well
ReplyDeletegreat job! loved all the details simran! i like how you explain the whole id rather be cuddling than having sex part :)
ReplyDeleteThis post was really detailed from scalp to socks (hope you get what I mean) overall, it's on point.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, you can tell that Balthasar is becoming quite a young Romeo, and used evidence from the play like how he helped romeo and supports him. However balthasar has also spent time being influenced by not only romeo but the other montague boys who think of love in a different perspective
ReplyDeleteReally good job. You did an awesome job of expressing how love is a special thing and it was really detailed. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThe best part of this post is the vibe Erlynn picked up on.. that he looks up to Romeo and his version of love. I think perhaps the generic love statements could be replaced with more specific ideas about how he feels about Romeo and Juliet and what he wishes for in the future. You hint at it… make it explicit. :)
ReplyDeleteGood job Simran, the best part of your post is how you wrote that Balthasar cares about Romeo and looks up to him
ReplyDeleteI really like how you captured the essence of the character, great job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used Romeo as an example to describe how you would view love, especially the part where you mentioned loyalty. Loyalty is important in any relationship especially when your in love.
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