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English
10 overall has been a great course; I enjoyed it greatly. I am definitely going
to miss this class because it was different and really taught you more than
just the course. English 10 this year was a great course academically and mentally.
Self-Regulation:
My attendance this year has been fairly
well, the only times I have not been here is because of leadership events. I
have attended almost every class this year, and am usually on time as well. If
I am ever late, I have a valid reason although I was rarely late. If I miss
work and make sure I to figure out what I am missing before, and I will
complete it either way. I make sure that I know what the assignment is and if I
have questions since I missed the work, I make sure to ask. I always take
responsibility of missed class and work. I am prepared for class; I always
bring my iPod with a fully charged battery. Just incase, I always bring a
charger if my iPod dies. I would use my device efficiently and stay on task
most of the time. I would try to finish as much work as I could in class and
try to complete it to my best ability. Sometimes I would get distracted if
someone messaged me, but I would turn on do not disturb to stop notifications
from popping up. This would help a lot more because nothing would pop up and I
would just focus on my work. I sat with people who weren’t distracting, but
actually let me work well. I was able to work well with my group because we
would tell each other we are working and let each other focus, and if one of us
needed something we would simply ask each other. We worked a long well,
individually and together as a group. I was able to get quite a bit of work
done while sitting with my group. I used class time pretty well to complete my
work. I would complete quite a bit of it while in class, and I would try to
finish as much work as I could in class so I would have less homework! The peer
discussions we had usually focused on work, tasks we were given, or helping
each other out. In general we all didn’t
talk too much unless we were talking about work. Sometimes but rarely we would
talk about something random and then get back to work. Most of my assignments
have been completed on time; the only thing is I have forgotten to submit them.
Most times if an assignment is late it is because I forget to submit, and leave
it on my blog! My assignments are usually completed to the given time though,
but it’s just the submitting that puts it off. I was respectful to my peers in
class, or even on Edmodo. I listened to others patiently and respectfully when
they talked and waited for my turn to talk. I stated my opinion politely and
without being rude. Even in comments, I would state my opinion and what I had
to say respectfully and nicely. I would take everyone into consideration and
then say something. I read the entire novel by myself; I didn’t tell someone to
explain what happened. I read the entire book and made sure that I understood
it completely and read with my full ability. I made sure that my peers and I
behaved well. For myself I would turn on disturb and put in music so I wouldn’t
get distracted and would focus on my work. If one of my peers were not doing
their work, I would tell them to get on task and start working. Sometimes while
others were talking, a peer would be on their phone and occasionally if they
wouldn’t stop I would take their phone politely and tell them to stop. I would
also tell someone to take out his or her headphones if someone was talking.
This class has taught me a lot about class time and using time wisely. Overall
I think I deserve a 29% in this category.
Quality
of Communication Skills:
Thinking
(Oral Language)
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I make personal connections in a lot of the assignments we
were given. I use emotion and understanding towards the text and often use my
own experiences in my writing. One example I used was in the summative
essay I used my personal experience and explained how I realized what walking
in someone else’s shoes is like. I also explain my opinions using reason and
evidence, in my essays I gave reason and essay especially in, who murdered
wellington essay.
I often use context in my writing, and make sure that I am
trying to get to the point. I use structure in my writing along with
punctuation. I make sure to know the difference between formal and informal
writing. I use formal writing in essays making sure to make it more concise and
straightforward. I use citation properly and remember to give credit to the
source where I have gotten my information.
B12 recognize and explain how structures and
features of text shape readers’ and viewers’ construction of
meaning, including
·
– form
and genre
·
–
functions of text
·
– literary
elements
·
– literary
devices
·
– use
of language
·
– non-fiction
elements
·
– visual/artistic
devices
I remember my poetry/literary terms to a fairly well level
considering the fact that they are used from grades 8-12. I can usually
identify them in poetry or any text. Overall I think I have improved in my
writing skills along with speaking. I think I deserve 30% in third category for
the efforts I have made.
Contribution
to the Learning Environment:
In
this class I have contributed to the learning environment to a great level. I
have made comments on my peer’s assignments and given them suggestions or tips
on what to improve. I also comment things on Edmodo, and share my opinions with
the class. I always engaged in conversation and listened to others thoughts and
ideas because this helps with your own ideas and helps you express more. I
would often help my peers if they did not understand an assignment or were
stuck in a certain situation. While helping others you don’t only teach them
something, you learn something as well. You can improve from their mistakes as
well as yours. I also improve my work by editing my work according to comments.
Often people will comment on my assignments and therefore I will improve something’s.
You can learn from your mistakes and editing it makes you improve something,
which reminds you the next time you write. I will usually read on a regular
basis since I love reading books especially mystery books, or a series of
books. I always bring a positive attitude to class along with a smile, and am
always ready to learn and help others. Overall I think I deserve 30% in this
category.
The
final mark I believe I deserve is 90% 9thnkas for the extra 1%!) for the
efforts I have made this year. This was a great class, and I will truly miss
the wonderful memories made in this class.
Bhullar this is a well done final, even if you didn't post it to the edmodo. You usually have well done work. I agree with the vast majority of your final. One area I would adjust the mark (and maybe encourage you to be extra careful of next year) is your actual writing. It often feels a bit forced, with words that are used to sound proper or formal but that aren't actually correct. For example "My attendance this year has been fairly well". In this case you remember being told the rule "I did well" instead of "I did good". But your attendance has been "good"… not well. If you look through the comments on your essays it seems to be a theme, that there is lots of writing but it could be more authentic, more concise, and more focused on unique ideas. That will be more and more important as you move to senior classes. Overall you did well, you are a lovely personality (even if you did torture Ryan all year) and you a maintain positive energy in class and your work. I think you have over shot your middle section a little but agree you are still an A student. I think perhaps 87% perhaps better reflects the A behaviour and B writing combo we saw this this year. Hope you did well on the final. God Bless. :)
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